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ah2981's Avatar
Posted by: ah2981
2014-01-09 11:48:21
W00tw00t
Overall:
92
 
 
 
 
 
I liked it and the way it flowed. easy to read and well done but I didn't like second from the bottom how you used "fair" twice.
Pianoabuser's Avatar
Posted by: Pianoabuser
2007-06-10 02:47:54
Great rhyming. What's it about?
Overall:
76
 
 
 
 
 
Well-crafted, quite jaunty, and quite a cheery tone judged by the triplet rhyming on each line.

So, given that it seems like a sorrowful love poem at its heart, you picked the exact wrong structure.

Still, I can't fault your imagination, so you've at least got that going for you. I've seen so many poems that just bore me to death, and this was far from that.

Good job.
maddkid53's Avatar
Posted by: maddkid53
2007-05-24 08:25:44
w00t!!
Overall:
82
 
 
 
 
 
Nice rhyming!!!




yeah thats all i really have to say.
mcornetto's Avatar
Posted by: mcornetto
2007-05-08 05:27:42
What are you...a rhymer?
Overall:
80
 
 
 
 
 
I liked the rhyming scheme you used. The first two stanzas were good. In the last two the rhyming seemed a bit forced.

Work on these last two stanzas.
Michael Danton's Avatar
Posted by: Michael Danton
2007-03-22 11:39:00
Lovely Fender Benders
Overall:
90
 
 
 
 
 
This poem was really rather clever, using similar sounding words not once per line, not twice, but thrice! This is really original and great fun to read.

The third quatrain got a little bit obscure and the last was a bit of a stretch and at times your interesting format sounded a little bit forced.

How awful was this?

9/10 Sublime!
KrazyKracker's Avatar
Posted by: KrazyKracker
2007-03-16 08:28:48
A bit Sappy
Overall:
78
 
 
 
 
 
the poem was a bit sappy for my taste. the flow got a bit strained at times. the rhyming was for the most part well, but some of the metaphors didnt make sense to me. the wholepoem really didnt make sense to me. i could tell it was about love but the title doesnt fit with it.
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