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Beyond Science
Rating:
67.54
Perspectives: 2
Votes: 24
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Posted by: UrbanAncient
2007-05-01 12:43:11
Style: Sci-Fi/Action
Number of pages: 4
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Log Line:
The Doctor and Martha are in the time before time, watching time happen. Sounds confusing... not nearly half as bad as what happens to The Doctor and Martha...
Production Notes:
I wrote this as my first ever narrativ attemp. Please give feedback.
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Posted by: Pale Moon
2007-05-15 16:52:36
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Overall:
67
Concept: 17
Characters: 14
Dialogue: 10
Presentation: 10
Plot: 16
This, I'm sure would make a very good episode of Dr. Who. I was a little lost here and there, as to what exactly is going on but the general story was good. You will need to read it carefully again yourself and make some of the passages a little clearer and fix a few mistakes. Other than that, it was a good first attempt.

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