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Rite of Passage - Ch.1
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76.93
Perspectives: 3
Votes: 28
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Posted by: Coop83
2007-03-23 09:22:22
Style: Fantasy/War
Number of pages: 9
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Rite of Passage - Ch.1
 
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Log Line:
In order to make it in the world, you will need a job. Some jobs are more dangerous than others. Understandably, they do pay more as well... if you return alive, that is.

If you are going to make it in this world, you are going to need some friends you can depend upon. Can our seven adventurers depend upon each other?
Production Notes:
I first came up with this idea while on a construction management course at Worcester College of Technology back in 2001. It has taken me that long to get to a proper state of affairs with the storyline.

Thanks to the Writer\'s Guild and Late Night Lounge on the Newgrounds BBS, I have pushed myself into writing this much. Now you get to see the next draft of what I have come to call Rite of Passage.

I do have more chapters, which will be submitted soon. Please bear in mind that it is still a work in progress, so changes can be made at any time.

Thank you for reading and for those of you who do, thank you in advance for reviewing, as I thrive on feedback.

Will Cooper
23rd March 2007
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Posted by: LEVELInGUP
2007-05-15 08:43:00
smart orcs.
Overall:
76
Concept: 17
Characters: 14
Dialogue: 19
Presentation: 10
Plot: 16
i liked this one. and i am glad you did not use teh stereotypical orc. you made them very smart in this one.


the story had a few grammer problems like don't and your. but the story was very interestign and flowed very nicely with the dialog.
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