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West From Hell Ch. 1
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MattMan657's Avatar
Posted by: MattMan657
2007-05-09 19:11:49
Style: Western/Action
Number of pages: 5
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West From Hell Ch. 1
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Log Line:
The first chapter in the western novel, West From Hell.
Production Notes:
This is my first submission in a good while. I have been very preoccupied with school, sports, and a few other things.

I have been working on this for awhile. I am actually almost done with Chp. 2 but I wanted to get this into the open before I submited 2.

The story is about a US. Marshal that journeys out west on an assignment. That is really all I can say as of now because this is only chapter one.

Anyways, Enjoy!
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Posted by: Michael Danton
2007-09-29 07:49:52
Concept: 20
Characters: 10
Dialogue: 15
Presentation: 13
Plot: 17
I've been anticipating reading the series for a while now and I must say it's refreshing to get back into it and reading this was the perfect way to do it. This chapter was very light and flowed very quickly; although that's normally a good thing it borrowed too heavily from the detail department and that's a careful balance you need to work hard to maintain. Brilliant concept, by the way, it has great promise.

On to the next one.
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