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Concrete Trees
Rating:
83.60
Perspectives: 3
Votes: 20
L-C's Avatar
Posted by: L-C
2007-10-31 15:52:26
Style: Abstract/Political
Number of pages: 1
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Concrete Trees
 
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Log Line:
Concrete trees...Everywhere...
Production Notes:
Originally going to be an attempt at me making song lyrics, I got lazy I just turned it into a short poem about how the countries are growing (I may make it into some lyrics at a later date). It is slightly abstract in the sense that the concrete trees are really a symbol for something else.

Bonus points to whoever can work out what I mean by concrete trees.
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Posted by: Sistine
2008-02-29 13:26:09
What a concrete jungle this is
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While I'm afraid it lost my interest a bit due to general repetitivity along the way, I liked it--nice message, funny rhyme scheme, helter-skelter meter. Cool beans, man.

I'm gonna hazard a guess at the meaning of the trees--

Buildings? Skyscrapers? The tyrannous leaders of our faulty nations?
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