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Ode to the SES
Rating:
77.38
Perspectives: 10
Votes: 60
Michael Danton's Avatar
Posted by: Michael Danton
2007-03-07 19:45:56
Style: Comedy
Number of pages: 2
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Ode to the SES
 
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Log Line:
A comical set of quatrains dedicated to my unit of the State Emergency Service.
Production Notes:
First and last read at the Annual christmas party of 2002. I wrote it in the previous two days while assembling bee-hives. Taking a "Fourth Perspective" on things, it isn't very good but I did manage to illicit some laughs from a drunken mob, as if that's any achievement worth mentioning.
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Posted by: Lindione
2008-03-08 19:42:29
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Rhyme scheme was ok but "halt" and "bolt" don't rhyme. There weren't many poetic elements to it. It made me smile a little but overall it wasn't really funny. It was kind of confusing in a few places as well since I wasn't sure what you talking about.
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