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Zombie Crisis Crisis
Rating:
81.14
Perspectives: 7
Votes: 49
LazyPint's Avatar
Posted by: LazyPint
2007-12-13 15:58:50
Style: Comedy/Horror
Number of pages: 3
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Zombie Crisis Crisis
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 13
Carousel Reward Points: 30
Log Line:
I try to write "Zombie Crisis". Can I make it to the end?
Production Notes:
This was actually quite fun to write, though it probably took longer than it should have. Trying to write two different parts at once was interesting, and I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
Latest Perspective on Zombie Crisis Crisis
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Posted by: XDarkGlimmerX
2013-07-02 12:03:03
Good, but a bit off
Overall:
66
Concept: 18
Characters: 15
Dialogue: 18
Presentation: 10
Plot: 5
It was a good story at first, with the added dialogue providing funny bickering between the two authors, (or whoever they're supposed to be) but the ending seemed stupid and immature, though that may have been the point.

I liked the concept a lot.

The two 'authors' were funny and realistic, but the main character had literally no personality.

Dialogue?
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