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Left Alone: The School
Rating:
49.00
Perspectives: 2
Votes: 15
ToxicKlay's Avatar
Posted by: ToxicKlay
2008-08-06 20:48:03
Style: Horror/True Story
Number of pages: 14
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Left Alone: The School
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 603
Carousel Reward Points: 60
Log Line:
Four kids. One School. 3 billion zombies.
Production Notes:
Hey, you all knew this was coming. Hopefully I\'ve deviated a little from my standard writing to produce a works that will satisfy.

Please write a perspective!
PLEASE!
Latest Perspective on Left Alone: The School
XDarkGlimmerX's Avatar
Posted by: XDarkGlimmerX
2013-07-02 12:13:25
Okay, but far too fast
Overall:
45
Concept: 15
Characters: 5
Dialogue: 5
Presentation: 5
Plot: 15
The story seemed good nerd takes charge of school in zombie apocalypse. But the pacing was far too fast. There should have been a lot more detail, in the surroundings, in the characters, the actions they take. If you slowed down the pacing, and put more detail into the characters, then the story would have been really good. For now, it gets an okay.
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