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The Bloodred Bullet
Rating:
83.59
Perspectives: 3
Votes: 17
Zerok's Avatar
Posted by: Zerok
2007-03-11 07:09:26
Style: Drama/Action
Number of pages: 2
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The Bloodred Bullet
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 81
Carousel Reward Points: 20
Log Line:
Plane meets mountainside while life stumbles out the door dazed and confused.
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Posted by: Pale Moon
2007-04-30 23:51:47
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Overall:
76
Concept: 18
Characters: 15
Dialogue: 16
Presentation: 13
Plot: 14
Nicely described and attractive but didn't really hold me captivated. It is however a very different concept though, to end your life as a stain on a rock and to speak from that unenviable position.

You are obviously a good writer but it needs more heart.
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