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Kevin and the Chicken Sandwich
Rating:
82.18
Perspectives: 2
Votes: 17
The Doctor's Avatar
Posted by: The Doctor
2007-03-11 16:08:38
Style: Comedy
Number of pages: 2
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Kevin and the Chicken Sandwich
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 81
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Log Line:
A short plunge into the mind of a lad whose mental health is highly questionable. Largely inspired by the work of Bret Easton Ellis.
Production Notes:
I'm currently writing in the stream of consciousness medium, this being one of the first serious pieces I wrote in the style. At first I didn't care much for this, as it's generally quite rough around the edges and wasn't written to any sort of a planned structure at all. However, it forms the basis for my subsequent pieces in which I've been polishing and refining this writing style. Enjoy.
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Scarab-Stalk33r's Avatar
Posted by: Scarab-Stalk33r
2007-03-12 11:42:41
Very Enjoyable
Overall:
79
Concept: 17
Characters: 17
Dialogue: 13
Presentation: 18
Plot: 14
I liked it, the B.E.E influence is very noticeable, mostly in the splendid first person, which is ideal for the plot in this story.

Even in two pages, the character of Kevin is recognisible by his mind, and his interactions, even though there isn't many.

I suppose my main whinge is that it isn't just a little bit longer. I'd love to see where it went after the mild ending. I know it's a short story and all, but you got me on tentahooks.

Still, very enjoyable. 79/100.
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