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Kevin and the Philosopher King
Rating:
81.71
Perspectives: 2
Votes: 17
The Doctor's Avatar
Posted by: The Doctor
2007-03-13 15:22:06
Style: Comedy
Number of pages: 1
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Kevin and the Philosopher King
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 41
Carousel Reward Points: 0
Log Line:
The delusions of Kevin return, this time in the form of the Philosopher King.
Production Notes:
This is quite a short one, written all in one sitting late at night. Upon re-reading I can't for the life of me figure out what the hell the point of this was supposed to be.
Latest Perspective on Kevin and the Philosopher King
Michael Danton's Avatar
Posted by: Michael Danton
2007-03-19 11:49:59
Actions Speak Louder Than Turkeys.
Overall:
78
Concept: 17
Characters: 17
Dialogue: 15
Presentation: 19
Plot: 10
Wow, you're in big trouble if your baked dinner brings up questions that throw doubt on your sanity.

That cooked bird did pose some interesting questions though and I consider this interplay the "meat" of the story and was excellently done, the other dialogue I thought was necessary but not terribly well executed as I couldn't grasp the awkwardness of the situation.

M.
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