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Kovalsky's Remedy
Rating:
93.08
Perspectives: 4
Votes: 37
Zerok's Avatar
Posted by: Zerok
2007-03-26 17:00:01
Style: Historical/Drama
Number of pages: 11
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Perspective Reward Points: 133
Carousel Reward Points: 20
Log Line:
A man relives his violent past through his writing.
Production Notes:
In grade 11, we had to write a report that took either the side of the Palestinians or the Israelis in regards to the age-old conflict that brews there. I chose an Israeli standpoint and wrote the report in a stroy form. The paper got top marks for historical content, but the actual story itself isn't a riveting tale. However, you might learn or take something away from it... so yeah. Enjoy it.
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Posted by: Rabids
2007-06-14 20:00:56
Wow.
Overall:
99
Concept: 20
Characters: 20
Dialogue: 19
Presentation: 20
Plot: 20
All I can say is WOW.

You captured so much. The emotion conveyed was slick. The imagery was spot on.
A wonderful tail my friend

A++

If you got anything less then a 100, you would be cheated. I just had to give a 19 for dialog because I thought there could be just an incy-wincy bit more real-time dialog at the end. Maybe to himself...but meh, whatever, I was just looking for something to downplay.


All in all, amazing.
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