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What if your life is taken away because you questioned the meaning of life? Would you accept your fate, or would you open the box?
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Posted by: Sistine
Vague, yet entrancing
Intriguing. With this, you've taken an age-old metaphor--about pawns and the game of life--and given it a new meaning, in a sense. This has left me with much to contemplate, but I implore you for the vigor in which you put this forth.
You lost points in dialogue due to a screwy sentence around 3/4 of the way through.