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Checkmate
Rating:
86.40
Perspectives: 5
Votes: 35
Fallen Hazel's Avatar
Posted by: Fallen Hazel
2007-03-30 15:46:42
Style: Thriller/Drama
Number of pages: 9
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Checkmate
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 132
Carousel Reward Points: 0
Log Line:
What if your life is taken away because you questioned the meaning of life? Would you accept your fate, or would you open the box?
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Sistine's Avatar
Posted by: Sistine
2008-04-13 21:00:57
Vague, yet entrancing
Overall:
88
Concept: 19
Characters: 17
Dialogue: 15
Presentation: 18
Plot: 19
Intriguing. With this, you've taken an age-old metaphor--about pawns and the game of life--and given it a new meaning, in a sense. This has left me with much to contemplate, but I implore you for the vigor in which you put this forth.

You lost points in dialogue due to a screwy sentence around 3/4 of the way through.
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