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Lok
Rating:
82.25
Perspectives: 2
Votes: 16
Fallen Hazel's Avatar
Posted by: Fallen Hazel
2007-04-05 16:08:43
Style: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Number of pages: 5
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Lok
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 213
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Log Line:
Where a city sleeps, the light and dark tear at its walls for control, and one man may take on the world to save those inside Crime City.
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Posted by: Endsville
2007-08-10 12:32:18
A job well done
Overall:
89
Concept: 17
Characters: 18
Dialogue: 17
Presentation: 18
Plot: 19
Very good indeed. Like your other stories I feel it was slightly fast paced leaving not enough time for emotion. But it sure as hell's still great!
Interesting piece of work that like your others, doesn't give much away.

Oh, and I like the Lok and Kol thing. It was like the names of the two detectives in Checkmate, Queen and Bishop. Very clever.
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