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Strawberries and a Field of Orchids
Rating:
83.05
Perspectives: 4
Votes: 22
Zerok's Avatar
Posted by: Zerok
2007-03-09 12:49:22
Style: Drama
Number of pages: 2
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Strawberries and a Field of Orchids
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 64
Carousel Reward Points: 20
Log Line:
Choices float by like dandelion seeds.
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Latest Perspective on Strawberries and a Field of Orchids
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Posted by: ah2981
2013-02-20 13:37:47
Alot better than i thought it was going to be!
Overall:
87
Concept: 15
Characters: 14
Dialogue: 20
Presentation: 18
Plot: 20
this was great! i was expecting something sweet and nice and it wasent and that was awesome. i loved the plot and the diologue was perfect. I liked how you set up the male but the female i wish i knew a little bit more about. the concepts were good but i wish it was a little longer. Smile
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