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They Have Arrived
Rating:
58.17
Perspectives: 4
Votes: 29
ToxicKlay's Avatar
Posted by: ToxicKlay
2007-06-22 09:57:18
Style: Thriller/Horror
Number of pages: 8
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They Have Arrived
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 177
Carousel Reward Points: 60
Log Line:
Survivors of a zombie epidemic have to escape from the dreaded virus, but can they?
Production Notes:
Its 8 pages long, a nice read for you people!
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Posted by: Sistine
2008-01-26 21:55:23
I fell asleep!
Overall:
50
Concept: 17
Characters: 9
Dialogue: 8
Presentation: 8
Plot: 8
There was barely anything to this. Maybe 5 adjectives in the entire piece, if you're lucky. Zombie epidemics are supposed to be suspenseful, horrendous, graphic, violent. This was none of those things. I'd give a serious lookover, there was a few technical errors here and there. however, the biggest problem was clearly the utter lack of depth.
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