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Chestnuts and Love
Rating:
85.93
Perspectives: 4
Votes: 27
Zerok's Avatar
Posted by: Zerok
2007-03-09 12:58:47
Style: Comedy
Number of pages: 2
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Chestnuts and Love
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 47
Carousel Reward Points: 20
Log Line:
The strangely erotic story of Bill and his Chestnut.
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Latest Perspective on Chestnuts and Love
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Posted by: bookgeek99
2012-08-12 23:49:35
Weird, but cute
Overall:
90
Concept: 19
Characters: 18
Dialogue: 18
Presentation: 17
Plot: 18
First of all, where the hell did you think of the idea for that? Don't get me wrong, I really liked it, but why the hell would one come up with something like that? Just a question.

Secondly, I really enjoyed this weird little short story. It had a cute simplicity to it that I enjoyed. However, there were a few times where I felt like you lost that cute simplistic narrative voice one when you said "divorce lawyers would be the shit" and the other when you said "don't question love, fool!" I just felt like you lost the voice a little bit.

But other than that, I really enjoyed it. I didn't think I would, but I did. Keep writing quirky little stories like this.
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