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Darkness
Rating:
84.91
Perspectives: 7
Votes: 45
Tacit's Avatar
Posted by: Tacit
2007-08-27 02:55:52
Style: Abstract
Number of pages: 3
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Darkness
 
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Perspective Reward Points: 20
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Log Line:
Death is not freedom.
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Latest Perspective on Darkness
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Posted by: ah2981
2013-02-05 07:46:32
loved it
Overall:
67
Concept: 18
Characters: 15
Dialogue: 5
Presentation: 15
Plot: 14
I disagree with gumOnShoe, i liked it alot, i thought it was wellpresented with only a few errors here and there. I didt like the dialoge much, i thought it was more entertainingly kiddish than the story called for sence it was short lines. "You will serve me. Your soul is mine. Thatís why I captured you." I kinda laughed at that becasue its a dark story and your lines are something out of a bad T.V. show. becideds that i loved the plot the way you discribed your captor. the fact that it was pitch black but still you could see your captor was amazing. I dont think gumOnShoe relized it was more of a dark characheter, one whos so dark that it is even blacker than black itself. I would have loved for it to be longer but i thought it was great and i want to read more.
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