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Love, life and the Universe
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83.00
Perspectives: 1
Votes: 13
tazeena's Avatar
Posted by: tazeena
2009-02-12 18:41:40
Style: Abstract/Drama
Number of pages: 3
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Love, life and the Universe
 
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This is very random. Essentially six short monologues spoken by three women. One speaks of love, one life and one the universe. There is no plot or storyline, simply musings on experiences and life. It is not really a proper play. It is the first time i have tried to turn something i wrote into something that could be performed so feedback is more than welcome Smile
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Posted by: Michael Danton
2009-02-13 04:00:37
A star of the stage.
Overall:
83
Concept: 18
Characters: 15
Dialogue: 20
Presentation: 15
Plot: 15
When reading this play, the first thing that struck me was the fact that the dialogue isn't what you would call prosaic, rather it's very colloquial in nature and lends itself very strongly to the spoken word. I've also noticed that you've chosen your words carefully to facilitate power and emotive qualities in the speech, things that an actor can just belt out without fear of tripping over her words.

This piece is very well written from that standpoint and the content is quite compelling also, all things considered I think it's quite inspired.

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What I would have liked to see was a bit of interplay between the speakers, not to each-other, but relating to what had previously been said and I would have liked it culminate to an evident conclusion.

Although this screenplay doesn't use conventional formatting, it hardly matters as it's the concept that's important and the concept is good.

Well done and welcome to FP.
M.
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